Rochelle’s phot prompt this week is of a derelict old factory building, empty for years..or is it ?
photo courtesy of J Hardy Carroll https://rochellewisoff.com/2017/09/27/29-september-2017/
Here’s my 100 word story:
Behind Closed Doors
” Bea, aren’t we lucky to get this hidden venue ? We can work up our new show in secret, then launch it in the town. They won’t know what’s hit them !”
” Yes, Betty – our burlesque show. What are you best at ? Fan dancing, tap, banjo, belly dancing, singing, comic scenes from Macbeth..?”
” I’ll play the handsome hero and saw you in half.”
” So what shall we call our show, to get the audience in ?”
” The Divas of Delight…”
” Beyond Belief…”
” Funny Girls…”
” Bea and Betty’s Burlesque ?”
October 1, 2017 at 4:32 am
Enterprising young ladies.🙂
October 1, 2017 at 9:12 am
You’re right, they are !
October 1, 2017 at 3:34 am
Perfect. So creative.
September 30, 2017 at 1:36 pm
Outrageous dialogue. So want to eavesdrop hear more.
September 30, 2017 at 4:52 pm
Glad you want to hear more, thanks. I wanted Bea & Betty to be eccentric and a bit zany.
September 30, 2017 at 5:46 am
I enjoyed how the conversation flowed in the story!
September 30, 2017 at 4:55 pm
Thank you, pleased you like the conversation.
September 29, 2017 at 12:49 pm
Dear Francine,
And you are closer to the truth of the photo. 😉 Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
September 29, 2017 at 2:07 pm
Thanks Rochelle.
September 29, 2017 at 9:28 am
Let me know when the show hits the town – I’ll be there! Delightfully different.
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September 29, 2017 at 2:09 pm
Glad you like the sound of the show ! I truly do like a burlesque show.
September 28, 2017 at 10:04 pm
Is anyone still doing burlesque? Fun conversation between these two.
September 29, 2017 at 2:09 pm
Thanks for your kind comment.
September 28, 2017 at 8:24 pm
Sounds like it will be quite an evening when it does appear in town! 🙂
September 29, 2017 at 2:11 pm
Glad you like the sound of it…I was trying to make the acts as over the top as possible.