photo courtesy of Rochelle Wisoff=Fields
Rochelle’s photo prompt this week is of a beautiful cut glass bowl, that inspired my 100 word story.
Who Broke In ?
Well Detective Burran, what do we glean from this crime scene ? Apartment owners called us, reported a break-in whilst they were out.
We need to check for theft – laptops, objets d’art, money or damage. Any fingerprints ? No.
Strange, Oates, the purpose of the forced entry is what ? Owners report they found their family photo album open at the page containing their grand-parents’ wedding photos. Also the album had been moved next to their family heirloom glass bowl. Today is the anniversary of their grand-parents’ wedding.
So Burran, no crime here.
Oates, do you catch the faint aroma of rose petals ?
May 28, 2018 at 9:45 pm
I love the hint of rose in the air! Nicely done ghost story.
May 29, 2018 at 6:52 pm
Thank you Alicia – so glad you liked it.
May 27, 2018 at 7:51 pm
There is nothing better than a good ghost story…
PS… you might want to take a look at the double they in the text.
May 28, 2018 at 7:14 pm
Thanks Bjorn – pleased you’re a fan of ghost stories. Also for prompting me about the double ‘they’.
May 27, 2018 at 11:41 am
A phantom visit! 🙂
Nicely done!
May 29, 2018 at 6:52 pm
Thanks for your feedback – pleased you liked the story.
May 26, 2018 at 5:46 pm
Lovely mystery… or ghostly visit!
May 28, 2018 at 7:15 pm
Thanks Dale so glad you liked the mysterious ghost story/ ghostly mystery !!
May 28, 2018 at 9:17 pm
🙂
May 26, 2018 at 3:18 pm
Gotta love a good ghost story 🙂
May 28, 2018 at 7:16 pm
Thanks Granonine – pleased you enjoyed the story.
May 26, 2018 at 10:43 am
Dear Francine,
Just a ‘crime’ of love and passion. Lovely story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
May 28, 2018 at 7:17 pm
Pleased you liked it Rochelle. Inspired by your cut glass bowl of course.
May 26, 2018 at 9:43 am
Not sure Detective Burran’s the right man for the job. I think this is a case for Ghostbusters!
May 28, 2018 at 7:18 pm
Yes Jilly- think you’re right. Think detective Burran wouldn’t get ghosts, would he ?
May 26, 2018 at 8:47 am
A lovely ending. Great read.
May 28, 2018 at 7:18 pm
Thanks for your kind feedback – pleased you like the story.
May 25, 2018 at 10:50 pm
Sounds like a break out to me
May 28, 2018 at 7:19 pm
Thanks Neil. not sure what a break out is – please tell me.
May 28, 2018 at 7:39 pm
Like a jaill break