Sammi’s challenge this week is to write 19 words on the theme of
SILENCE
Here’s my take.
WAITING
You breathe in, you breathe out,
Then silence.
I hold my breath.
The slow thud of your heart beat ceases.
Sammi’s challenge this week is to write 19 words on the theme of
SILENCE
Here’s my take.
WAITING
You breathe in, you breathe out,
Then silence.
I hold my breath.
The slow thud of your heart beat ceases.
April 7, 2019 at 8:48 pm
Dear Francine,
Chilling story in few words. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
April 8, 2019 at 2:07 pm
Thank you Rochelle. It was the first subject that came into my head.
April 7, 2019 at 12:21 pm
Crushing visual.
April 7, 2019 at 5:13 pm
Thank you Violet, I appreciate your comment.
April 7, 2019 at 12:13 pm
Oh. And then you’re dead? Oh, and then you know all about silence.
April 7, 2019 at 5:16 pm
Thank for your comment.