Sammi’s challenge this week is to write exactly 74 words on the theme of horizons.
The alley near my house, strewn with sodden wrappers,
the shimmering mirage of an oasis in the desert, shadowy Bedouin amongst palm trees.
My future self.
That moment of recognition when we first looked at each other.
Villa Rufolo, standing in its Garden of the Soul, gazing entranced by the Bay of Naples, merging into the endless topaz enormity of it.
Far as the eye can see, I
Glimpse the I within
February 10, 2019 at 1:54 pm
From sodden wrappers to a Villa. Excellent.
February 12, 2019 at 12:59 pm
Thank you Keith, appreciate your feedback.
February 10, 2019 at 10:54 am
You transported me from sodden wrappers to topaz enormity in the span of 74 words. Well done.
February 10, 2019 at 12:37 pm
Thank you Rochelle for your appreciation – glad you felt transported…
February 10, 2019 at 10:22 am
That’s an intriguing piece.
February 10, 2019 at 12:44 pm
Thank you for your comment.