photo courtesy of Fatima Fakier Deria.

Rochelle’s challenge this week inspired by Fatima’s photo, a simple domestic scene, or is it ?

THE VISIT

Celeste’s sigh skims the curtain in the night-time kitchen, tidied ready for  next day’s breakfast,school and work. How dare they carry on living without her, who’d been the beating heart of this  family ? He married Carol three months after Celeste’s passing, carefree and mean Carol. She acquired Celeste’s boys in a heart beat.

Her husband dreams of holding Celeste, but she fades as he reaches out for her. He dreams he can see his boys who are prodding an injured bird with a stick. He wakes full of foreboding and fury at her for leaving him.

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